I applied the updates requested during the 2022-06-08 SG16
telecon to the draft
revision (reload; now dated 2022-06-11). Assuming no obvious
typos or other errors are identified, this revision will appear as
P2572R0 in the June mailing. Please let me know if you feel any of
the changes are not inline with the changes requested during the
telecon.
Changes since the previous revision include:
I received negative feedback regarding not publishing a revision
of this paper with a "P" designation in an official mailing prior
to now. That feedback was mostly concerned with the lack of a
recorded change history in the paper itself as the proposal
evolved with successive reviews. I admit to being experimental
here. I have an impression (for which I have no evidence) that
people tend to read the first revision of a paper, but mostly only
look at the change history in successive revisions of a paper
unless they become involved in further discussions or wording
review (I know I am guilty of this). Depending on the quality of
the change history, I suspect this can lead to a reader having a
skewed impression of the evolved design. With this paper, my goal
was to have the first revision of the paper reflect the SG16
consensus as it emerged from our study group such that the change
history in later revisions would reflect its history through the
rest of the committee. Any additional commentary on this approach
is welcome. Given the negative commentary received so far, I
intend to publish earlier next time. I intend to continue
scheduling reviews of draft revisions of papers in accordance with
authors' wishes.
Tom.