I applied the updates requested during the 2022-06-08 SG16 telecon to the draft revision (reload; now dated 2022-06-11). Assuming no obvious typos or other errors are identified, this revision will appear as P2572R0 in the June mailing. Please let me know if you feel any of the changes are not inline with the changes requested during the telecon.

Changes since the previous revision include:

I received negative feedback regarding not publishing a revision of this paper with a "P" designation in an official mailing prior to now. That feedback was mostly concerned with the lack of a recorded change history in the paper itself as the proposal evolved with successive reviews. I admit to being experimental here. I have an impression (for which I have no evidence) that people tend to read the first revision of a paper, but mostly only look at the change history in successive revisions of a paper unless they become involved in further discussions or wording review (I know I am guilty of this). Depending on the quality of the change history, I suspect this can lead to a reader having a skewed impression of the evolved design. With this paper, my goal was to have the first revision of the paper reflect the SG16 consensus as it emerged from our study group such that the change history in later revisions would reflect its history through the rest of the committee. Any additional commentary on this approach is welcome. Given the negative commentary received so far, I intend to publish earlier next time. I intend to continue scheduling reviews of draft revisions of papers in accordance with authors' wishes.

Tom.